Acid

[SM]

Fine. You are a little overpowered... Too much 100% hit stuff.

[SM]

Name: Acid Last name...

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Elements: Water (toxic water a.k.a. acid), Wind

Experience Points: Level 1, 0 EXP

Credits: 0 Good... Same with everything abvove except name.

Primary Weapon: Acid ring( holds all my acid powers) What TYPE of weapon is it? Spear? Sword? Halberd? Glaive?

Secondary Weapons: Whip No secondary weapons yet.

HP: 2000 HP Fine.

Stats:
VIT: 5
ATK: 8
DEF: 2
AGI: 10
INT: 4
DEX: 7
Your stats need to add up to 30... These add up to 36.

Default Attack:
Green Star
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Star: Drain*1
25 * 8 HP
...Your type of attack needs to be fixed... You also have a non-elemental Default Attack, and Drain isn't an attack type yet. 300 is suitable here.

Techniques (Physical Attacks):
Green Star
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Star: Drain*1
25 * 8 HP
Same as above.

200 HP, user loses 89 HP, drain most of there strength
What? Where did this come from?

Back Flip Kick
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Back Flip Kick- Kicks Them
50 HP, Knock opponent to ground
...As with above problems... And knockdown would allow you for even 250 damage.

Acid Pins
Level 1 : 0 EXP
Acid Element
Rain Down and pierces there skin
250 HP
...Hits how many?

Acid Droplets
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Droplets - Blows up on them
160 HP, penetrates
How many peopel does it hit? 200 damage.

Wind
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Wind – Blow them away
100
200 if it hits one... I assume the "blow them away" part is just description.

Tornado
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Blinds them
190 HP, blinds for 1 turn
Blind is for one turn... 200 damage.

Magick (Special Attacks):

Whirlwind
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Magic: Self explanitory
89 HP Charge 3
Why 89? 350 is fine for Charge 3.

Wind Fumes
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Magic: Put opponent to sleep for 1 turn
300 HP, hypnotizes them to sleep
250. You need a charge as well.

Acid Rain
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Magic: Heals Me
290 HP (CHARGE 2)
Healing not allowed... You don't et a Healing Move until later on.


Rage Awakening (Critical Attack):

Acid Wind Explosion
Level 1: 0 EXP
Mixed Elements (Acid and Wind)
Explodition
500 HP, Blows opponent up 99% of the time
...No insta-kills.

Rising Desperation (Desperation Attack):

Friend’s Help
Level 1: 0 EXP
Magick
Faerie: Heals Me and Attacks the opponent Fiercely
700 HP, penetrate the opponent
OK... But no healing.

Protective Manuevers (Defense Attacks):

Bubble
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind and Acid Element
Shields Me for 2 turns
From what? You need a Wait.

Name: Aurora
VIT: 5
ATK: 10
DEF: 7
AGI: 8
INT: 9
DEX: 1

+ Positive qualities * Have the most poweer and defense as in need for 1 turn

- Negative qualities* I am powerless for 3 turns and heal on the heal by 50%.

Just one attribute? You can't draw power without a limit... You can add to your stuff, though... And your stats need to have downs if they have ups. Powerless means what? What heal is there?

[shadowhunter]

Err, silare, er, sorry to disturb you but Acid wasn't even on for like 3 monthes staight

[SM]

I know, but he came over a little bit before I just posted that... >_>

[Acid]

Name: Acid Langara

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Elements: Water (toxic water a.k.a. acid), Wind

Experience Points: Level 1, 0 EXP

Credits: 0

Primary Weapon: Acid Ninja Star( shoots all my acid powers)

Secondary Weapons: Whip

HP: 2000 HP

Stats:
VIT: 5
ATK: 8
DEF: 2
AGI: 10
INT: 4
DEX: 7

Default Attack:
Green Star
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Star: Drain*1
25 * 8 HP

Techniques (Physical Attacks):
Green Star
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Star: Drain*1
25 * 8 HP

200 HP, user loses 89 HP, drain most of there strength

Back Flip Kick
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Back Flip Kick- Kicks Them
50 HP, Knock opponent to ground

Acid Pins
Level 1 : 0 EXP
Acid Element
Rain Down and pierces there skin
250 HP

Acid Droplets
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Droplets - Blows up on them
160 HP, penetrates

Wind
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Wind – Blow them away
100

Tornado
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Blinds them
190 HP, blinds for 1 turn

Magick (Special Attacks):

Whirlwind
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Magic: Self explanitory
89 HP Charge 3

Wind Fumes
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Magic: Put opponent to sleep for 1 turn
300 HP, hypnotizes them to sleep

Acid Rain
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Magic: Heals Me
290 HP (CHARGE 2)


Rage Awakening (Critical Attack):

Acid Wind Explosion
Level 1: 0 EXP
Mixed Elements (Acid and Wind)
Explodition
500 HP, Blows opponent up 99% of the time

Rising Desperation (Desperation Attack):

Friend’s Help
Level 1: 0 EXP
Magick
Faerie: Heals Me and Attacks the opponent Fiercely
700 HP, penetrate the opponent

Protective Manuevers (Defense Attacks):

Bubble
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind and Acid Element
Shields Me for 2 turns

Name: Aurora
VIT: 5
ATK: 10
DEF: 7
AGI: 8
INT: 9
DEX: 1

+ Positive qualities * Have the most poweer and defense as in need for 1 turn

- Negative qualities* I am powerless for 3 turns and heal on the heal by 50%.

[SM]

Still, you didn't read my post completely... Edit it again, since from what I've read, you haven't made much editing.

[Aethyr Zalain]

Am I the only who noticed that I had Back Flip Kick before Acid?

[Acid]

Name: Acid Laranga
Gender: Male

Age: 16

Elements: Water (toxic water a.k.a. acid), Wind

Experience Points: Level 1, 0 EXP

Credits: 0 Good... Same with everything abvove except name.

Primary Weapon: Acid Ninja Stars( holds all my acid powers)



HP: 2000 HP

Stats:
VIT: 2
ATK: 8
DEF: 2
AGI: 10
INT: 7
DEX: 1

Default Attack:
Green Star
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Star: Drain*1
25 * 8 HP

Techniques (Physical Attacks):
Green Star
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Star: Drain*1
25 * 8 HP
Same as above.



Back Flip Kick
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Back Flip Kick- Kicks Them
50 HP, Knock opponent to ground
...As with above problems... And knockdown would allow you for even 250 damage.

Acid Pins
Level 1 : 0 EXP
Acid Element
Rain Down and pierces there skin
250 HP
...Hits how many?

Acid Droplets
Level 1: 0 EXP
Acid Element
Droplets - Blows up on them
160 HP, penetrates
How many peopel does it hit? 200 damage.

Wind
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Wind – Blow them away
100
200 if it hits one... I assume the "blow them away" part is just description.

Tornado
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Blinds them
190 HP, blinds for 1 turn
Blind is for one turn... 200 damage.

Magick (Special Attacks):

Whirlwind
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Magic: Self explanitory
89 HP Charge 3
Why 89? 350 is fine for Charge 3.

Wind Fumes
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Magic: Put opponent to sleep for 1 turn
300 HP, hypnotizes them to sleep
250. You need a charge as well.

Acid Rain
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind Element
Magic: Heals Me
290 HP (CHARGE 2)
Healing not allowed... You don't et a Healing Move until later on.


Rage Awakening (Critical Attack):

Acid Wind Explosion
Level 1: 0 EXP
Mixed Elements (Acid and Wind)
Explodition
500 HP, Blows opponent up 99% of the time
...No insta-kills.

Rising Desperation (Desperation Attack):

Friend’s Help
Level 1: 0 EXP
Magick
Faerie: Heals Me and Attacks the opponent Fiercely
700 HP, penetrate the opponent
OK... But no healing.

Protective Manuevers (Defense Attacks):

Bubble
Level 1: 0 EXP
Wind and Acid Element
Shields Me for 2 turns
From what? You need a Wait.

Name: Aurora
VIT: 5
ATK: 10
DEF: 7
AGI: 8
INT: 9
DEX: 1

+ Positive qualities * Have the most poweer and defense as in need for 1 turn

- Negative qualities* I am powerless for 3 turns and heal on the heal by 50%.

Just one attribute? You can't draw power without a limit... You can add to your stuff, though... And your stats need to have downs if they have ups. Powerless means what? What heal is there?

[SM]

...I told you to fix your bio, not repost what I wrote... >_>

[shadowhunter]

Silare-sempai, err, did you read what omni said? He said that Acid took one of his attacks, Back Flip kick