Water Kami
Post by SM on May 29, 2005 21:17:58 GMT -5
*agrees with Elhaz* Comments will be in this colour...
Name: scyphe Rotare Good... I recommend you ploish up your bio a bit with capitalization used more as well as punctuation just to make it easier to read later on...
Gender: Male Everything from Gender to the Stats is fine.
Age: 16
Elements: wind,dark
Experience Points: Level 1, 0 EXP
Credits: 0
Primary Weapon: shadow blade[swrd]
Secondary Weapons:none
HP:2100
Stats:
VIT: 6
ATK: 5
DEF: 4
AGI: 5
INT: 5
DEX: 5
Default Attack: splitter
lvl:1-0 exp
normal
swrd:slash-all
230hp I think somewhere like 260 HP will do.
physical attacks:
chaotic split
Level 1: 0 EXP:
dark
Swrd: Slash - one:
210,peirce Umm... Try 230 HP.[/b]
rotating burst
lvl 1: 0 exp:
wind
swrd:spin-all:
220hp,penetrate Penetrate is bettter than pierce, so it should do less than Chaotic Split... I'd say about 210 is good here.
sonic split
lvl1: 0 exp
wind
swrd-slice-air attack
200hp Nothing special to this? Then 240-270 HP is fine... Default Attack is just a regular strike, so this can be marginally stronger.
great thrust
lvl1: 0 exp:
normal
swrd-thrust-one
230hp,peirce No element... You can add about 10 more HP to it.
Special Attacks:
shadow shot:
lvl1: 0 exp:
dark
special:blast-one
280[charge 1] Just one small error - Special should be Magic, otherwise it's fine.
hurricane breaker
lvl1: 0 exp:
wind
magic-lightning-all
300[charge 2] Erm... Make it 320...
shadow burst
lvl1: 0 exp:
dark
magic-fire-one
290[charge 1] OK......
air blast
lvl1: 0 exp:
wind
magic-blast-all
310,slow,1 attack[charge 3] 250... 310 is too much...
Critical Attack:
true splitter
lvl1: 0 exp:
normal
swrd-slice-all
450,penetrate[under 20% only] OK.
Desperation Attack:
ultimate typhoon
lvl1: 0 exp:
wind
magic-burst-all
520[under 5% only] Eh... OK.
Defense Attacks:
shadow lock-negates a physical attack and stops the usage of spears for 1 turn
wait-2 If any physical attack, it becomes RECHARGE 4... If it's a Spear Physical Attack, that's fine.
Avatars:
Name: awakened typhoon
VIT: 1
ATK: +3
DEF: -1
AGI: +5
INT: -2
DEX: 0
+ Positive qualities
+increases wind attribute attacks by 40hp
+gains extra enrgy raising his hp by 100
+increases speed greatly,allowing scyphe to attack one more time in a turn
+gives all wind element swrd attacks the slow attribute by 1 turn
You do realize that addition of 1 VIT and the second attirubte means +200 Max HP, right? The slow attribute thing is too strong... Unless you have an EXTREMELY large downfall to go with it.[/b]
- Negative qualities
-loses defensive power
-loses some intelligence
-can't use slice attacks
-other attacks lose their special properties
You already lose DEF and INT as part of the avatar... The negative qualities are external things, so the first two are invalid.
Name: scyphe Rotare Good... I recommend you ploish up your bio a bit with capitalization used more as well as punctuation just to make it easier to read later on...
Gender: Male Everything from Gender to the Stats is fine.
Age: 16
Elements: wind,dark
Experience Points: Level 1, 0 EXP
Credits: 0
Primary Weapon: shadow blade[swrd]
Secondary Weapons:none
HP:2100
Stats:
VIT: 6
ATK: 5
DEF: 4
AGI: 5
INT: 5
DEX: 5
Default Attack: splitter
lvl:1-0 exp
normal
swrd:slash-all
230hp I think somewhere like 260 HP will do.
physical attacks:
chaotic split
Level 1: 0 EXP:
dark
Swrd: Slash - one:
210,peirce Umm... Try 230 HP.[/b]
rotating burst
lvl 1: 0 exp:
wind
swrd:spin-all:
220hp,penetrate Penetrate is bettter than pierce, so it should do less than Chaotic Split... I'd say about 210 is good here.
sonic split
lvl1: 0 exp
wind
swrd-slice-air attack
200hp Nothing special to this? Then 240-270 HP is fine... Default Attack is just a regular strike, so this can be marginally stronger.
great thrust
lvl1: 0 exp:
normal
swrd-thrust-one
230hp,peirce No element... You can add about 10 more HP to it.
Special Attacks:
shadow shot:
lvl1: 0 exp:
dark
special:blast-one
280[charge 1] Just one small error - Special should be Magic, otherwise it's fine.
hurricane breaker
lvl1: 0 exp:
wind
magic-lightning-all
300[charge 2] Erm... Make it 320...
shadow burst
lvl1: 0 exp:
dark
magic-fire-one
290[charge 1] OK......
air blast
lvl1: 0 exp:
wind
magic-blast-all
310,slow,1 attack[charge 3] 250... 310 is too much...
Critical Attack:
true splitter
lvl1: 0 exp:
normal
swrd-slice-all
450,penetrate[under 20% only] OK.
Desperation Attack:
ultimate typhoon
lvl1: 0 exp:
wind
magic-burst-all
520[under 5% only] Eh... OK.
Defense Attacks:
shadow lock-negates a physical attack and stops the usage of spears for 1 turn
wait-2 If any physical attack, it becomes RECHARGE 4... If it's a Spear Physical Attack, that's fine.
Avatars:
Name: awakened typhoon
VIT: 1
ATK: +3
DEF: -1
AGI: +5
INT: -2
DEX: 0
+ Positive qualities
+increases wind attribute attacks by 40hp
+gains extra enrgy raising his hp by 100
+increases speed greatly,allowing scyphe to attack one more time in a turn
+gives all wind element swrd attacks the slow attribute by 1 turn
You do realize that addition of 1 VIT and the second attirubte means +200 Max HP, right? The slow attribute thing is too strong... Unless you have an EXTREMELY large downfall to go with it.[/b]
- Negative qualities
-loses defensive power
-loses some intelligence
-can't use slice attacks
-other attacks lose their special properties
You already lose DEF and INT as part of the avatar... The negative qualities are external things, so the first two are invalid.